I hope everyone will welcome Ben (another of the Leskey clan) as one of our new writers, joining us for this challenge! He's given us a very intriguing fantasy story.
Black Rock of Tek-Fremsel
By Benjamin Leskey
Tinuntelu si Tek-Fremsel Reitkan, Shori Kostenli si 196 Indgrin
Following the story of a black stone and the events that it could
perceive
In the center of Tek-Fremsel, standing by the road upon the
forge property, there was a strong iron tripod about four feet above the
ground. The black legs of this tripod went down at angles, deep through the
soil and into the rock. None of the townsfolk knew just how deep; many years
ago some inquisitive men had dug four yards down, but they had met solid rock
before finding a leg’s end.
The top of
the tripod had once been a cage, but the wires and bars now were ripped out
like spikes, as though they had been forced apart from the inside. Nobody could
know this had happened for certain, of course, since it had been standing there
long before any of the townsfolk could remember. The open cage was now home to
a few odd pebbles and some dry leaves, but the true focus was a single black
gem. This oval-shaped stone, known as the Reitkan of Tek-Fremsel to
some, was around six inches long, and had a translucent and crystalline
appearance. It was considered an heirloom of sorts by the blacksmith, though he
hadn’t paid it any mind for many years.
On a fine
afternoon of the eleventh day in the Golden Quarter of the year 196 IN, the hot
sun shone brilliantly over the green fields surrounding the town. All was
operating as usual in Tek-Fremsel, the rare festivities of the new year having
passed ten days ago. A woodcutter hauled his load of logs in from the north,
destined for the sawmill below the hill upon which the town was built. A woman
with a basket of eggs walked past the forge, heading for the market from which
the smell of fresh bread and fruit was carried by the wind. And in the forge,
the chief blacksmith hammered away on red iron, forging a set of horseshoes for
his brother’s farm.
A strong young man now entered town, walking up the southern
slope and encouraging his team of two draft horses to pull a heavy cart filled
with iron ore over the hill. He passed by the tripod and stopped his horses
before the forge, wiping sweat off his forehead.
“Oi!” he
called to the blacksmith, walking towards him. “Duryk!”
“Tintelm!”
shouted the blacksmith in reply, “You’re mightily early this year!”
Duryk
stopped pounding on his anvil and strode to meet the newcomer as he entered the
forge. They conversed for several minutes just inside the shade of the
building, Duryk beginning to frown as their talk continued. Then he seemed to
get an idea, and the two men walked out towards the tripod.
“I wouldn’t
be surprised if you could get extra profit by selling it though,” Duryk said.
“I know plain money is best for you, but my merchant won’t be back from the
north for another ten or twenty days and this is the best I can offer unless
you want to stay around.”
“Don’t
worry about it,” Tintelm replied. “The amount you’re offering me combined with
the gem is enough, I won’t use it all at once. I just want to get this unloaded
and head north as quickly as possible, I’m tired of the mines. Up there I can
join the border guard and be free from the dust and dark tunnels. I never
understood why my father loved that place.”
“The border
guard is a dangerous place to be,” Duryk said with a bit of concern. “I know
you’ll be careful, but I hear that the Northmen are getting very bold in
crossing the channel. That new queen of theirs is really aggressive, they say
that she is a wielder of ren, a rentem, and a good one too.”
“I know,
that queen Yirji is a danger, but I’ll be careful, no use in my getting excited
just to die foolishly. Anyway, let’s get on with the trade.”
“Right
then, here it is.”
Duryk
walked over to the tripod and stuck his hand into the cage, brushing away leaves
and taking the stone out of it. He handed it to Tintelm.
“It’s not
much to look at, but I know it’s worth something. A long time ago a jeweler was
passing through, he told me I should sell it. I didn’t though, never been in
need, and it’s just been sitting here for decades as a monument to whatever.”
“It’s a
wonder nobody took it, out in the open like this,” Tintelm remarked.
“Nobody
here knows it’s actually worth anything. Everyone just considers it a fancy
rock, myself included. But there’s bound to be some nobleman or jeweler who
likes that particular rock, and there’s your chance. I’m still just a bit
reluctant to just give it up like this since it has been here so long, but
you’re my friend, your father was my friend, and getting an early start on
forging weapons for the border guard isn’t a bad thing for my profits.”
“I’m truly
grateful, Duryk,” Tintelm said.
“Well, it’s
just a rock after all. You’ll be wanting your share of these too.” He took a
pouch of bronze coins and counted some out, handing them to Tintelm, who placed
them along with the stone in a leather wallet he kept within his clothing.
“Say,
Duryk, do you want one of the horses and the cart too? I’ll throw those in for
free, I only need one horse to ride up to the border, and you’ve been generous
to me.”
“I can’t
decline that offer. I’ll help you unhitch them and then get that iron unloaded
into my forge.”
Later that
evening, Tintelm reached into his wallet and took out the stone, inspecting it
as he relaxed in his room at the inn. It felt quite cold in his hands, much
colder than the coins that had been beside it in the wallet. The lamplight
flickered through it, emerging in wavering gray lines that danced upon the
floor and walls. He stared at it for a minute before placing it back in his
wallet and lying upon the bed, falling asleep immediately.
*
Tintelm crunched down a breakfast consisting of some sort of
vegetable before leaving the inn. Metal jingled slightly as he saddled his
horse. Then he swung up and set off, his horse’s hooves thumping dully against
the packed dirt. For a few hours he rode uneventfully, occasionally singing
quietly to himself and listening to the harsh calls of the crows that
frequented the area.
After a
little while a faint humming could be heard, masked by the rustling leaves of
the vibrant forest that lined the road. Easily mistakable for the sounds of
insects, Tintelm did not notice it at first, continuing in his song as he rode.
In a sudden
reaction, a shockwave burst from the black stone, pounding once against the
leather wallet and thudding against Tintelm’s body. He jerked away in surprise,
reaching with his hand to feel what had just happened. Then a massive burst of
air seemed to explode beside him. The force threw him off his horse, and he
crashed onto the road heavily. Out of the forest came several people, their
heavy footsteps trampling the bushes and grass before they reached the road.
Tintelm scrambled to his feet and snapped his knife out of its sheath.
“Who are
you!?” he shouted. “What do you want?”
“We want
you to drop the knife and hold your hands in the air,” came the reply. “Do it
now if you want to live.”
Tintelm’s
knife clattered against the coarse stones of the road as he released it. Two of
his attackers came forward and took hold of him.
“You will
accompany us,” said the first, who stood slightly away from the others. “Let us
go.”
Tintelm was
pushed forward into the forest by one of the bandits; the second followed close
behind, and the third smoothed back the bushes they trampled. For about a
minute they walked in silence, moving deeper into the forest.
Then
Tintelm stumbled and almost fell, but as he did so he drew a second knife and
spun around, lunging forward towards the bandit nearest to him.
“Don’t
move!” he shouted. “Lay down your arms if you value the life of your comrade!”
There came
a scoffing laugh from the bandit in the middle of the group. “So if we move
you’ll kill Trendry? Then you’ll have lost your hostage and we’ll be in quite a
rage, how’s that supposed to help you any?”
For a
moment Tintelm didn’t reply. Then he made as if to speak, but as he did so
there was a powerful blast by his hand. The shock sent the knife flying out of
his grasp, and threw Tintelm himself off balance so that he landed upon the
ground.
“Ow!”
exclaimed Trendry. “That knife cut me, you’ve got really poor aim, Prendry!”
“Don’t
complain,” said the one who had laughed. “You’ve got all this power, and you go
and get yourself taken hostage by a kid with a dagger.”
“You should
have been up here then, see if you could react better than me.”
Tintelm
grunted as he collected himself. “What was that?” he said. “What did you do?”
The third
bandit now drew up to the group. “That, my friend, was obviously ren. We are
rentem, proof that being a chosen one doesn’t mean everyone likes you.”
“Maybe we’d
like you better if you didn’t waylay us on the road.”
“Bah,
you’re all scared of us either way, like the cowards you are. Alright, get up,
let’s move!”
On they
trod again, in silence. Tintelm didn’t seem to have any more hidden weapons, or
perhaps he didn’t think it worth the trouble just to be struck with the strange
blast again.
Then, as
they stopped, the leading bandit threw Tintelm roughly to the ground, hard
earth instead of dry leaves meeting his fall. The two other bandits stood
around, the one arriving last speaking.
“Now then,
boy,” he said, “Give us what we’re looking for.”
“No, stop
there,” said Prendry. “That’s entirely the wrong way to go about it, Drendry.”
He crouched beside Tintelm. “Look here,” he said. “You’re carrying something,
something that feels quite nice, maybe some metal or a stone. Just hand it over
and tell us what it is, and then we’ll let you go. We won’t even take your
money.”
“I don’t
know what you mean,” Tintelm said.
“Oh,
really? You must have recently acquired it, maybe it is colored silver or
black.”
There was a
pause, and Tintelm reached for his wallet, taking out the black stone and
handing it to Prendry. The bandit took the stone, smiling as he examined it. It
flickered with light as the sun shone in the small clearing.
“Do you
know what this is?” he asked Tintelm.
“No, I
don’t.”
“I hesitate
to use it without first discovering its purpose, tell me where it came from
then.”
“It was
just lying around back in the city, in a tripod.”
Prendry
thought for a moment, then turned and tossed the stone to Drendry. “Here, see
what you can find.”
Drendry
carefully turned the stone in his hands. “I really don’t want to get involved
with that Order of Araman, but he or one of his followers might be our only
chance of discovering what it is.”
“He might
turn us over to the king though,” put in Trendry.
“It’s not
like we’ll be meeting in a situation where we can be captured. We’ll just meet
the wise Araman outside his settlement or something, with our power it’ll be
easy to escape after he explains what this thing is.”
“We’ll
think about that later,” Prendry said. “For now, both of you take this boy back
to the road. I’ll head immediately to the meeting place, catch up as fast as
possible and don’t leave tracks.” He took the stone from Drendry and walked off
into the forest as the other two bandits took hold of Tintelm and began
escorting him roughly back.
The stone
felt pleasantly cool against Prendry’s hand. It was calming, a small piece of
tranquility that existed unmoving against the flow of ren around it. Then it
pulsed once, a reaction to a rustling power high above them. The force nearly
made Prendry drop it, and he brought it up to examine it.
There was a
rustling from above, and he jumped back as a woman fell from the trees. She was
wearing a white robe, and the hem floated just above the forest floor,
impeccably clean.
“Who are
you?” he said, placing the stone in his pocket. A humming sound came from his
hands.
“I am
Telmilee,” she said. “Tebur of Araman the Wise. And before you ask what I want,
I’ll just take it from you and be off. Farewell!”
There was a
tremendous burst of air, and the woman flew forward, knocking the unprepared
Prendry over, and in the same motion grabbing the stone from his pocket. She
stopped for a moment, holding on to the trunk of a small birch, then launched
from it again until she grabbed the next tree. Using this jagged yet fast
movement, she caught up with the two bandits and Tintelm within a minute.
“Greetings,
gentlemen!” she said.
They turned
around as she raised her right hand in the air with a flourish, then bringing
it down. Two columns of dust and leaves, but mostly air, crashed down upon the
bandits, who fell heavily under the pressure. Tintelm was so terrifically startled
by this that he jumped backward and crashed into a tree. Telmilee walked over
to him.
“I’m here
to help you, to some extent,” she said. “My name is Telmilee.”
“I am
Tintelm,” said Tintelm, still shaken. “Why are you here?”
“I just
told you, to help. Of course, this is the other reason.” She held the
stone out to Tintelm. “Put it back in your wallet.”
“Where did
you come from?” he asked, taking the stone.
“I came
from the house of Araman.”
“Then you
are of his Order? I can see you are indeed a rentem.”
“Yes, I’m
wearing this robe as proof. Now, I present this choice: Come with me and meet
Araman, who will help you understand this stone, or you can continue on your
way and be assaulted by all manner of outlaw rentem who may or may not kill
you.”
As Telmilee
finished speaking, there was a loud pop from behind her, and a sharp stone flew
past like a dart, embedding in the ground so that it was barely visible. She
and Tintelm both quickly turned to see Prendry approaching them. A gray aura
was visible around his hands, and he was in quite a rage.
“Rise, my
brothers!” he shouted, and from his hands flickering circles sped.
The fallen
bandits had apparently only pretended to be incapacitated, for they were
launched into the air by similar force, and they threw more of this humming air
at their two targets.
Tintelm was
still holding the stone, and as he threw his hands up to protect his face, he
dropped the stone. But then, a strange thing happened. The stone did not fall,
but instead it seemed to wrap around to the top of his right wrist, where it
stuck. He began looking down towards the slightly shimmering stone, but he was
interrupted as the four pulses arrived in that moment, and from the stone there
was projected a wide dark field suspended vertically in the air in the shape of
a hollow hemisphere, rippling as the pulses touched and then vanished into it.
Behind this field, Telmilee’s own power had burst forward in a surge of air,
but as it collided with the hemisphere the wind dissipated into a falling cloud
of pebbles and dust.
There was a
pause for several seconds, as no one there understood what had happened. The
stone, meanwhile, retracted the hemisphere into itself and remained attached to
Tintelm’s wrist.
“The stone
is on my wrist!” Tintelm shouted, swinging his arm wildly. “It’s attached!”
“Remain
calm,” said Telmilee. The air swirled around her, and then burst out in a gale
that ripped across the bushes and leaves to the bandits, sending them flying
into the trees.
“Stop!
Please wait!” shouted one of them. “We surrender!”
“Then run
away, I won’t stop you. If you attempt to attack me again, however, I shall
destroy you. Do not oppose a Tebur of Araman!”
The bandits
immediately took the offer and made a hasty retreat. Telmilee had the air
whistle around her threateningly, providing extra motivation to their flight.
After they had gone some distance, she turned her attention to Tintelm.
“So, what
is the matter with your arm?” she said, then recoiled in surprise. “The stone
really is attached!”
Indeed, the
stone was beginning to turn faintly red, and it throbbed slightly to the beat
of Tintelm’s pulse as it hungrily absorbed blood.
“I’m
feeling quite dizzy,” Tintelm said as he struggled to his feet, using his left
arm to hold his right up across his chest.
“Can you
walk?” asked Telmilee. “I’m not sure what’s going on here, but your only option
is to go to Araman. Nobody else would know how to help you.”
“I can
walk, but first tell me: Why did you come here? Why did you help me?”
“That’s
simple, I came because I could sense that stone from miles away and I helped
you because I’m not a stone myself. Now let’s get going, it would not be good
for your health to delay any longer.”
*
Tintelm was nearly fainting by the time they arrived at Araman’s
settlement. The black stone was now completely dark red, and it emitted a cold
aura, no longer tranquil. Telmilee was helping Tintelm walk, on his left side;
she could not touch his right arm without the stone angrily pulsing at her and
causing Tintelm to shiver violently. Now as they entered the circle of huts and
tents that surrounded a central stone house it flickered a small transparent
hemisphere around it in a reaction akin to fear.
The circle
of huts contained many people, some in white robes attending to the speech of
an elderly man, others performing various ordinary duties. As the stone came
fully within the settlement, however, many of the people stopped what they were
doing and turned towards it. Some came closer, examining with curiosity the
strange feeling surrounding the stone.
“What is
this, Telmilee?” asked the elderly man, who had left his speaking position.
“I don’t
know,” she replied. “But we need to get him to Araman now.”
Two strong
fellows relieved Telmilee of Tintelm, who was now unable to hold himself up.
They bore him up towards the stone house and pushed open the door, Telmilee
following. The door led into a large room with two staircases leading up and
down, and several pillars holding up the beams. There was a table in the center
with a tall candle upon it, and a smell of burnt herbs.
Telmilee
removed the candle from the table and the men placed Tintelm there.
“Where is
this?” he asked faintly.
“You are
now in the house of Araman,” Telmilee replied.
A man came
slowly down the stairs, his white robe softly brushing against the walls. As he
entered the room, his great height became apparent, as he towered over all
those in the room. He walked over to the table and gazed at the stone with calm
gray eyes.
“Bring me
bandages,” he said quietly. At once the two men nodded and left the building.
He then addressed Tintelm in the same passive tone, “I am Araman. I will save
you from this death.”
He reached
forward and touched the black stone. Tintelm shook, and the stone recoiled, the
flickering within it dimming and drawing back.
“It
attached to him when we were attacked by several rogue Tebrakrentem, master,”
Telmilee said to Araman. “He tried to protect his face and it emitted a strange
field, similar to Syrej but stationary and of unfamiliar feeling, before
binding to his arm.”
The men
returned, carrying several bandages with them. “Here, as you have requested,
master,” they said.
“Thank
you,” replied Araman, taking them. “Now leave us, guard the door and do not let
anyone inside this room.”
They exited
at once, closing the heavy door behind them.
“What shall
I do, master?” Telmilee asked.
“You are my
Tebur, you shall watch and observe. Stand away from this table.”
Araman
returned his gaze to the stone, and the stone stared back. There was a nearly
imperceptible flash of golden color as he touched it and he was holding the
pure black stone. Tintelm’s arm was now bandaged.
“You are
healed,” Araman said.
Tintelm
tried to hold his bandaged wrist before his face, but so vastly underestimated
his strength that he slammed it into his forehead.
“Ow!” he
exclaimed, sitting upright. Then, “I feel fine! I’m healed!” He slid off the
table and flexed his arm.
“You are
truly great, master, I could not perceive what you did.” Telmilee said, coming
closer. “Tintelm, there is no pain?”
“None! I do
not know how to display my gratitude to you.”
“I ask no
payment,” Araman said. “My duty is to help humankind, in particular those who
wield or are affected by the absence of knowledge regarding ren.”
“That is a
ren stone then? I suppose that explains why it attracted those bandits who
captured me with their strange power before Telmilee rescued me.”
“Do not
call it strange. It is as natural as you are natural. The unnatural thing is
this stone.” Araman held the black gem before his face, but he closed his eyes
for a moment before opening them again. “This stone is evil. It is formed from
the blood of creatures of ren, invisible to the eyes of those humans who have
no conscious connection to the flow of ren. Those who forged it disregarded all
morality in order to build a truly powerful shield. Tell me, where did you
obtain this?”
“I was
given it in Tek-Fremsel by the blacksmith Duryk, it has always been there in a
black tripod before the forge.”
“I see. And
where were you going before these bandits attacked you?”
“I was on
my way to join the Border Guard in Tek-Syvad.”
“A noble
cause. It will be necessary for you to remain in my care for six days before
your body can recover its natural defenses against the wild ren-flow, but when
this time passes, if you wish, I will give you a horse and send you upon your
way again. All I ask in return is that you remember the name of Araman and what
I have done for you. Telmilee, direct him to an empty hut, let him be fed. I
will deal with this stone, I shall seal it in the void, for I cannot allow this
desecration to exist.”
“Yes,
master.” Telmilee said.
“I must
give my thanks again,” Tintelm said, as Telmilee accompanied him to the door.
“I will indeed remember your name, for how could I forget?”
As they
departed the building, Araman set the stone upon the table and went downstairs.
He returned with three bottles. From the first bottle he poured fine iron powder
in a circle around the stone; from the second, silver powder; and from the
third, small oak shavings. Setting the bottles on the ground, he looked upon
the stone and said, “May you now rest.”
There was a
deep pulse in the air. “Exter Fasrej Weilisiren,” Araman said. The
materials surrounding the stone flew outward and vanished into a mist. The
stone rose in the air, and from it ripped its last resistance, fields of great
power crashing against the slowly condensing mist. There was a deep pulse in
the mist. Araman raised his hand, and a golden light flashed once within the
mist. The world sped away through a circular window, and the stone was
suspended in a golden void, empty save for invisible pillars that resonated
with endless rhythm, extending in infinite height through the nothingness. The
window closed. There was a deep pulse in the void.
Copyright 2017 by Benjamin Leskey
This was an interesting and rather original fantasy story, I liked how you made the stone a central theme even though the story wasn't told from it's point of view. Tintelm was a likable main character and I also enjoyed the supporting characters. I think you did a good job with making this feel like a medieval world too, and the whole thing with the war and the magic system was really interesting. I wouldn't mind reading more about this realm.
ReplyDeleteAnd an official welcome as well, Ben! :)
An entirely fascinating story. It had quite a wonderful blend of fantastical elements, excellently manifested into naturalness. I enjoyed it very much.
ReplyDeleteThis was wonderful high fantasy! The rock attaching to Tintelm was completely unexpected, and I really like the phrase, "and from his hands flickering circles sped."
ReplyDeleteThis was a wonderful story! I enjoyed it very much
ReplyDeleteWhoa, that was intense! o.o I was really worried there for a bit... so glad it turned out okay! :) Really unique and interesting. I loved all the names and depth to the world and magic system etc.
ReplyDelete“proof that being a chosen one doesn’t mean everyone likes you.”
“Maybe we’d like you better if you didn’t waylay us on the road.”
^ THIS. I LOVED THIS. XD