Death
and Honor are in league
A Retelling of Homer’s “Iliad”
Author’s Note
This is a very loose retelling of myth. Some characters are not even
mentioned, and the time-frame has been severely compressed.
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“This apple is
bad! Gorgythion, give me yours.”
“I’ll split it
with you, Paris…” said Gorgythion hesitantly. He had been rubbing at his apple
to make it shine.
Paris screeched,
his beautiful small face turning red and ugly. “All of it! I’m older than you! And
my mother is the queen!” He grabbed the apple from Gorgythion, whose lip
trembled.
Hector grabbed the
apple before Paris could bite into it.
“That was not
honorable, Paris. Give Gorgythion back his apple, and you can have mine.”
He hesitated, then
dropped the apple into Gorgythion ’s lap. “Now give me your apple, Hector.”
His brother handed it to him, and he grinned.
***
Ten years later, Paris took something that no one could make
him give back.
King Priam, his
father, sent him to discus trading with King Menelaus of Sparta. On the day he
was to return small beadlike drops of rain fell randomly, sometimes several
near each other in a moment, and sometimes a place quite dry.
Hector kissed his
wife, who sat spinning wool the color of gold and now and then looking down at
their son, curled warm in his basket. “I’m going to the wall, to watch for my
brother.”
He wrapped his
short cloak about his massive arms as he made his way down the broad street,
calling out greetings and replying to those given him. Prince Hector of Troy
might not know how many pounds or rolls of trade goods came or went (though he
gave myself an aching head many a time trying); nor was he a great reader. But there was not a
man or woman in the city who he could not call friend.
“Prince Hector!”
Helibarbus, a leather worker, waved his hairy arm, grinning. “A son! A fine
son!”
“Fortune has
smiled!”
“Would you care
to see the lad?”
The baby was a
grand one, big and red and screaming like a fury. Hector took it carefully.
“A warrior!” said
his father. “With strength like that. It has been my prayer…”
The mother
winced.
“He’ll be a good
Trojan,” Hector said. “Warrior or no.”
When He reached the
wall a sudden gust of wind thrust his cloak out straight behind him. A girl screamed, and he turned in time to
catch hold of his sister as she swayed out at the edge of the ladder opening.
“Are you all
right?”
“Yes.” Her bare
arms chilled his hands. He took off his cloak and wrapped it around her.
“What are you doing
up here in the wind, dressed like that?”
“I was looking for
you; Andromache said you’d gone to the wall. Hector, I’m afraid.”
“Another dream?”
She nodded, the
thin white linen of her robe blowing around her. From when she had been just
learning to talk, Cassandra had had dreams of all manner of evil happenings. A
few had happened. Most had not; or not yet. So few had come true, in fact, that
no one save herself believed in them.
Which was how it
came to be that she told her brother Hector all of them. If he doubted, at least he would not mock.
This one, he
thought, must have been worse than usual.
“I dreamed Paris
came home, and he brought Athena with him, the goddess of war; and said she was
his wife.”
“Was that all?”
“No, I dreamed—I
dreamed the city was afire, like a brazier brimming with coals—and smoke, so
dark….” A tear ran slowly across her face, crooked its path as the wind pushed
it.
He put his arm
around her. When she had had a dream
that was all that could be done.
They stood there
in the wind until dust powdered the distance. Paris.
“Will you come to
meet him?”
“No. He’ll see
I’ve been crying. You go,” she took a rushing breath, “and I’ll wash my face.”
Hector was not
greatly surprised, when he met with his brother, to see a woman a few paces
behind him. Her face was veiled.
“Paris!”
“Hector.” He
smiled, widely, sweetly, guiltily. “I’m home, as you see. And I’ve brought a
wife.”
“A wife?”
“Helen, my brother
Prince Hector of Troy.”
She stepped forward
slowly. He pulled her veil back, despite her short soft cry of protest.
Hector saw a fair
face, white enough to make him wonder if she were well or no, with long yellow
ringlets drooping across it, and lake-like blue eyes that only looked him in
the face for a moment. It was not her beauty of which he thought, though she
was a woman beautiful indeed; called the fairest by many, though to him
Andromache was sweeter to look upon. It
was her shame and pleading that he saw.
“Greeting,” she
said, very softly and gazing at his sandals. Then she drooped her head farther
and silently became limp. Hector caught her as Paris exclaimed in astonishment.
“Is she ill?”
“No. Look, can she
rest at your place before going to the palace? I need your help.”
He raised his
hands as he said it, and Hector prepared to put Helen in his arms, but they
dropped as he turned. So he lifted her up, and followed him.
Andromache took
charge of Helen, and Hector took Paris into the other room.
“What have you done
this time, brother?” he asked, sure by this time that something was not as it
ought to be.
“I have taken a
wife! You did the same.”
“Did she wish to
be taken?” he asked sharply.
He took up a
black olive from a bowl on the table and ate it. “She said she did not,” he
said. “I did not believe her.”
Hector stared at
him, bewilderment and disapproval both on his tanned face as Paris slowly ate
another olive.
“I am ashamed,”
Hector said, repressing his anger. “You have brought shame to Troy.”
“Must you take
everything with such earnestness?”
“You will return
her to Sparta, take her back to her family. I will see that our father makes
you do this.” He spoke resolutely, taking a lengthy step to stand looking down
at Paris. “It is the only reparation you can make.”
“I can’t go to
Sparta; Menelaus would kill me.”
The faintest
knowing entered the older man’s heart. “Don’t be an idiot.” The back of his
neck and his ears warmed, and his shoulders grew tight.
“No, you don’t
understand.” He paused, blinking his girlish black lashes. “I took his wife.”
“You—We’ll have
Menelaus and all his allies upon us.
Upon our city! Why?”
“I love her,” he
said, picking at his immaculate nails.
“No!” Hector
shouted, and Paris shrunk back, frowning as if he had seen something misshapen.
“You have dishonored her, stolen her. Don’t tell me you love her! You’ve
brought our ruin, Paris, and for what? Your lust! I am ashamed to be one blood
with you!”
“Hector!”
Andromache put her hand on her husband’s arm, a small hand and uncommonly cold.
“Hector.” He looked down at her. “You’re frightening Helen, and she is not
well.”
He put his hand
over hers and tried to smile, because of her hand being cold and her eyes wide.
“I’ll be quieter.” She nodded and walked out. Scamandrious began to whimper.
Hector drew back
from Paris, the sort of anger that makes noise gone. This pretty, selfish
creature was Paris, who he had scolded and humored and watched over. A spoiled
child’s soul is ugly in a man’s body.
“Why?”
“I need your
help,” he said anxiously. “Ask Father to forgive. Father always listens to you;
you never ask for aught.”
“Except for you.
No.”
“You’ve always
helped me before.”
“This is different!
Dancing drunk for the envoys, shooting holes in the tapestries, sneaking into
the sanctuary during the most solemn rites—“ his voice had grown loud again, and
he paused, continuing softly ”—all of those are small next to stealing a wedded
woman. I will not help you.”
Paris blinked
slowly and his great eyes grew wet. Never before had his brother denied him
help.
“Brother….”
Paris left
Hector resolved to give him time to explain; and then go to King Priam. He
would need him.
“I know not how
this can be solved, but I’ll do what I can,” he said to the Queen of Sparta,
crying loudly on his couch.
Paris was not
punished. He never had been. But King Priam did grow somewhat cold to him.
Fine boats came
one morning, but not enough to be an attack.
They gave the
Trojans to know that they were peaceable, and wanted speech with King Priam.
Hector went out to them with a few warriors.
“We had thought
the King of Troy to be of a greater age,” said Menelaus. His hair was a shining
orange color, such as was very uncommon among Trojans. Small brown dots specked
his arched nose.
“I am his heir,
Hector. He is not well at this time; he bids me say that he will speak with you
in the palace, if such is your desire.”
The other man, very
strong of build with braided pale hair, looked at the plainly dressed man
distrustfully. “How can we know we shall
leave again?”
“You are welcome
to stay, if you wish,” Hector said, with the same courtesy if with less
friendliness. “We never refuse guests, nor do we force them to take
hospitality.”
They spoke
courteously to King Priam. “We recognize that you are not to be blamed for your
son’s action,” said Odysseus of Ithaca, the pale-haired man. “King Menelaus
desires his wife restored, and that Prince Paris shall own that he has done
wrong before all the people. If he is granted this—“
“There will be no
more said,” said Menelaus. “Although it would not be unreasonable for me to
demand—“
“Pray consider
our words, King Priam,” Odysseus concluded.
Hector walked out of
the room with them, taking them to the rooms offered as lodging.
“I hope the king
will comply,” said Odysseus. “This is not intended as a threat, or course, but
I believe there will be war if Helen is not restored.”
It was intended as
a threat, or at least a warning. “Our answer will depend on the will of the
people,” Hector said. Odysseus looked politely confused.
“The king has
little authority here,” Menelaus cut in.
“Not so, sir.
Surely the people have a right to choose their fate. It is not as if they are
our belongings.”
Later that day
Hector came upon Odysseus walking about, examining the houses and streets and
speaking with the people.
“Of a surety
we’ll get Helen back,” he said, with an urbane, explanatory smile. “I do not
think you would dare refuse her. I hear the people of Troy are but ill
warriors.”
“You heard
wrongly,” said the merchant he spoke to. “We fear you not!” He turned and went.
“Sir,” Hector said
to Odysseus,” you mar your chances by making us angry. For very pride they may
choose foolishly.”
“I do not
comprehend you,” he said. He looked up at a statue. “Magnificent silverwork.”
The people chose
foolishly. They would not have the Prince Paris humiliated; they would not
give up the lady Helen because foreign
kings demanded it; they defied all persuasion, growing bolder and louder as the
talk went on. At last Priam the king sat down, old and pale, and slumped a
little. He had ever sat straight as a statue of an ancient warrior.
“You speak to
them, Hector,” Gorgythion whispered. “You can make them see.”
Hector shook his
head. It was not his role, unless his father desired him to fill it. But then
Priam nodded at him. When Hector stood up the Trojans grew a little quieter.
“You are not
thinking clearly, friends,” he said. “The lady is Menelaus’s wife. It was not
right for my brother to force her to come with him. The King of Sparta has
every right to demand her of us.”
“We will seem
cowards!” Paris cried out from the back of the hall.
“I do not fear
to seem one, so long as I know it false! Let us do justice, and all will be
well.”
Paris came to the
forefront, wearing a thin flying blue cloak and a much-embroidered tunic.
Hector smelled the lily scent of his perfumed hair-oil.
“Is it justice,”
Paris said to the people, "to force a woman to return to shame and death? Is it
fitting for Trojans to act so, from fear of a few small kings?”
“Menelaus said
nothing about shame for her, only for you,” his brother said. “Doubtless he
knows you only are guilty.”
He turned away. “If the woman I love is to be thus shamed,” he breathed, “I will go with her,
die with her!” Tears ran down his face, prettier than the faces of many girls.
He dropped to his knees. “I appeal to your loving hearts!”
Justice and
reason had the chance of a fly in a fish-filled lake after that.
Priam was too ill
to give answer to the kings, so it fell to an unobtrusively fuming Prince
Hector.. Odysseus almost smiled, but said he was very sorry.
“I am sorry
indeed,” said Menelaus. “For it will be war, and I will destroy this place.”
“You will not do
so easily,” Hector said.
Troy waited,
storing all manner of food, mending armor, and calling upon allies. The king
grew better and even a little excited by all the armor and glinting swords, for
in his youth he had been a warrior.
Hector listened carefully to his father’s breathful voice
explaining tactic. He would have to lead all; and though good with swords, with
lances, though stronger than most men, yet had he never been in battle. He had
never killed a man. He did not want to slay, or be slain.
More than all he did
not want Troy to burn. No end must there be to children playing in the paved
streets, to women singing as they cooked, to washed garments hanging limp from
lines, to the laughing of babies, to the making of beautiful things not needed,
to the wispy incense-smoke of the temples.
Hector went home one
day, wet and streaked from practicing, to find Scamandrious walking. Andromache
dropped the gold-colored wool she was winding to laugh at his surprise. He had
thought of the lad as a babe, and here he was on his bulgy short legs, a boy
walking where he chose. These things
must never end.
To Troy came many ships, evil-looking, long-rammed, gaudy
leering eyes painted on them.
“I think every
Achaean king or chief has rallied against us!” said Prince Deiphobus. He
laughed shortly. “All the more praise to be won.”
“You will win
praise, and scorn as well,” said Prince Helenus, in the deep voice in which he
would very rarely speak of something unknown as fact. He was born with Cassandra, whose dreams Hector
began to think more than nightmares. Gorgythion
said nothing, but looked at Hector with the confident half-smile of a lad
looking at his invincible hero. His trust was terrifying.
Thus began the
days of war.
They surrounded
Troy like a tight steel belt, a horde; yet were those Troy saw not all of them.
Often and often news came in of some ally destroyed, some friendly king
conquered.
The Trojans did fight. They were too few. But they fought.
The first was on
the day they came in their glaring ships. As they came onto Trojan sand Hector
gathered together everyone who had been training to fight. He sent most of the
archers, Paris among them, to the walls to help the retreat if this went
ill.
Hector’s heart
threw itself around like a clumsy gymnast. He looked for his brothers.
Deiphobus was like a child waiting to do something he had always wanted to do.
Helenus was quiet and calm; Gorgythion pale and making unsuccessful efforts to
stand quite still. He was only seventeen. Hector caught his eyes and he turned
rosy, pulling himself up straighter than there was any need for.
It was simple,
truly. The Trojans rode in their chariots or walked out of the gate, and went
to where the Achaeans were. And then everyone began trying to kill each other.
It was easier
than Hector had thought. He stabbed with his spear, as he had done many times
practicing, leaning over the hard metal rim of the chariot. Shock he saw on a
round face, and slow blood running from an open mouth. As he pulled the spear
back the man whose name he would never hear fell backwards and somersaulted,
landing on his face in the dust. He made no sound that Hector could hear; the
prince was away by then, into the battle, and there was great noise all about.
Hector killed
many more men that day, and was sorry that he was not sorry. But there was no
time to regret, only to fight, and see his friends die, and look for his
brothers in short glances between blows.
Then a glad cry
leaped through the roaring, a cry like a man might give upon bringing down
game, and a young man in glittering armor lifted something rounded by a long
braid of dark hair and flung it at Hector, smiling. The prince could not help a
short cry of horror.
The glittering
warrior’s charioteer shouted to his horses, and Hector’s drew aside just before
the other’s wheel would have caught in his. Shining, a light lance vaulted from
the enemy’s hand. Hector’s shield trembled as the bronze struck it.
A pair of
frightened moon-silver horses plunged between them, jerking along an empty
chariot missing a wheel. Both turned to other foes.
The fight was
going nowhere. Men on both sides were dying, and that was all. Only the Trojans
were not fighting as well as at first.
Hector called for the retreat, shouting out until the back of his throat
felt as if rubbed dry with a rough bit of sacking. .
The gates
slammed, massive, behind them. Filthy and bloody they walked, pale or flushed,
and many helped a wounded man or carried a dead one. To be buried honorably by
one’s own people mattered much to the men of Troy.
Hector said
something appropriate, which a few minutes later he could not remember, so
guilty was he feeling.
Helibarbus smiled
reassuringly at him, although his face was bleeding.
“You fought well,
Prince Hector.”
But there must be
something more he could have done….
He was to find what
he was missing; but had he had choice in the matter, it would have gone forever
unfound.
Retreating from a
little fight one gray evening, just a small sally on foot so the Achaeans would
not begin to rest happily, Hector heard the soft plucked sound of a bow. At the
same time Gorgythion jumped in front of him, and fell down.
He fell roughly
on his back, and a long green-feathered arrow stood straight up from his neck,
just above where his breastplate began.
Hector screamed
his name as he dropped down beside him. Gorgythion’s wide eyes looked at his
brother, terrified. He lifted his hand and tugged lightly on the arrow, crying
out silently as his hand dropped helpless.
Hector lifted him
a little, carefully. Another arrow whipped past his eyes. Hector had seen many
wounds now. He knew that it would make no difference if the arrow were out or
not. But Gorgythion wanted it out; it was frightening, to have it sticking out
of him. Hector took hold of it and
pulled quickly, tears making a thin, wet veil for his eyes. He held on to the
trembling boy as if he could make him stay. An arrow tapped brightly on Hector’s
back plate.
“My lord Hector,
you have to go.”
He shook his
head. “You go. Go back to the city.”
Gorgythion’s
freckled hand tightened on his brother’s wrist, barely. “I’m with you.” Hector
said, trying to jam back the swollen rising in his throat, to play the
man. “I love you, brother….”
The ends of the
boy’s mouth rose slightly into a pained smile.
“I love you...”
Another arrow sliced shallowly into Hector’s ear.
Gorgythion’s
mouth relaxed, falling open, and his trustful eyes fixed on his hero’s face as
death ended his pain and his trust. Hector lifted him easily, and walked
towards Troy. He caught up with those he had sent on ahead. Silence took them,
all of them, and the people of Troy as Hector came into the town, on his way to
the palace. He was weeping.
Paris heard what
had happened and walked the streets far away from the palace, not wanting to
hear the mourning. He did not go to his house. Being in the same room as Helen
as pleasurable as being in the same room with an angry golden cat. He was sorry
that the boy was dead; that was very young to die, and he had been alive and
well— it might have been himself; a good reason not to venture outside the
walls…. Lucky that he was only good with a bow.
It was bothering
him more than he wished. He could not help thinking what Gorgythion would look
like, dead. Even if he was only the
product of one of Priam’s friendships. Even if he had always been Hector’s
favorite.
Paris leaned his
forehead against the chilly stone of the shaded rear of the temple. He turned abruptly at the sound of heavy
quick steps, his face returning to its usual uninterested beauty.
Disgust writhed
through Hector at the sight of Paris’s bland face. He walked on. But Paris
spoke.
“He was brave.”
“Yes.”
“I am sorry.”
Hector could not
bear it.
“It should have
been you!”
“Hector—“
“You began this,
and brought it to happening, and Gorgythion is dead, because of you. It should
have been you! I wish—“ Hector stopped speaking abruptly, and hurried on,
stumbling slightly as he turned.
Paris stared at
his wall-like back, with the expression of a spanked, rebellious child. “I wish
you were dead too,” he whispered. “I do; I’d be glad of it…” His brows almost met,
and his shaking lip grew tense as a tear dripped from his eyelashes.
The Achaeans sat
about their fires, for it was dusk, and they did not anticipate another attack
that day.
“We shall
assuredly win,” said King Menelaus. “Especially since good King Agamemnon aids
me.”
“I should say
probably, my lord,” said the young man in the glittering armor.
“Probably?”
“I have marked a
certain man in the fight as being somewhat of a warrior and a leader. I should
guess him to be a prince of Troy.”
“Prince Hector.”
“Howbeit, he lacks
ruthlessness and fury alike.” Achilles smiled. He knew he lacked neither.
“He may gain them,”
said Patroclus.
Achilles glanced
tolerantly as his younger friend. “They are born in a hero. Not a matter of
training.”
“Someone I judge
dear to him fell today. I saw it.”
“Your
imagination is colorful.” Achilles chuckled, as one might at the weird thought
of a child. Patroclus had grown up with him; he was essentially a brother, and
the only man for whom Achilles would trouble to have patience. “Where do you
find the time to invent past lives for all the enemy?”
A sudden shouting
roared up.
“My lords! The
Trojans are coming!”
Achilles walked,
not over fast, around the tent blocking his view. His brows rose. “Marriage of
Zeus! He’s gone mad!”
The Trojan
chariots jolted over the earth, the horses stretching out their legs wide and
fast. At the head of them all, spear in
hand and held high over the high crest of his helmet, roaring out deep
words—Hector.
Patroclus did not
bother to say that he had been right. Neither did Achilles admit it. Instead he
blazed a fierce grin at his friend. “I think we might have someone worth
fighting this time, brother.”
Hector and
Achilles met in battle, as all knew they would. The first warriors they were of
each of their armies. As they met the
fight elsewhere stopped, although this was neither ordered nor discussed. The
Achaeans and Trojans drew back, curved walls opposing. Between them Achilles
deflected a heavy blow.
“Hold, a moment!”
he said.
Hector drew back,
slightly. “What do you want?” His voice was rough, lacking the courtesy that he
had always diffused.
“I want to know
your name.”
“Hector of Troy.
Son of King Priam.”
“Achilles, son of
King Peleus.”
“I came to
fight,” said Hector briefly.
“As I,” returned
Achilles exultantly. Hector was of rank as he; and most powerful looking. He
had surveyed him carefully.
They brought
their swords clashing into each other.
As the two armies watched, sharply following every glint of bronze and
twisting of muscle, breathing unconsciously almost as one, in their hearts they
wondered if there would be a winner. The two men were well matched. If Hector
was a shade stronger, Achilles was quicker. Hector struck hard, hard as if this
one man were all his foes put into one.
Achilles smiled, laughing once as he slipped out of the way and then
lunged. The tip of his sword sliced a small line into Hector’s wrist.
There would be no winner. Surely not. The
thunder of Zeus was sounding. Surely even he was giving heed to such a fight.
Suddenly, shields
shoved together, Hector found himself staring into ice-clear gray eyes a few
inches away. They blinked once, thread-fine wrinkles at the outside corners.
Whatever smirked out of there was on the edge of blazing into song, and he did
not understand it at all. A feeling came to his back like a child’s snowy cold
finger following the length of his spine.
They drew apart, making ready to strike again. He was tired, and now
more sad than angry. The darkness grew
mighty.
White spider legs
of light plunged from the black clouds, and near thunder drove into ears.
Achilles stepped
back, smiling, and half panting. “It seems to be the will of Zeus we cease for
now,” he said.
Hector nodded. He
could not keep his people out here in a lightening storm; it would be
foolishness, what with all the metal they were wearing. And it was dark now.
“I want to
discuss a matter with you, Price of Troy,” said Achilles. “Concerning peace for
your city. Not now. In the middle ground, tomorrow. Dawn. No weapons, one
person with you.”
They had killed
his brother. Now they would make peace? Go home to their families? “I will be there.” Achilles held out his
hand. Hector let his barely contact it.
Inside the city
Paris’s body relaxed as he saw Hector enter alive. He moved out of sight,
trying to scowl.
Andromache’s
sandals tapped loudly on the hard floor, then softly on the rug. She turned
before meeting the wall. Soft on the rug, hard on the floor—the thunder was
crashing; no one would fight in a thunderstorm—soft on the rug—“Scamandrious,
no.” She pulled his hands away from the golden yarn stretched taut as lyre
strings across her loom, ready to begin weaving. Hard on the floor—
“Hector!”
Splatting
trickles of rain fell from him, making shiny spots on the stone. She put her arms about him, and said nothing
of her worry.
“My brother is
dead,” he said. “He is dead, and so many more today. I have killed more than I
can remember.”
“It is war,
Hector. You have done no wrong. You—”
“Today I wanted
to kill. For the first time.”
Before the sun
rose the rain ceased, leaving an opaque dome of clouds. Hector, standing before
the palace after telling his father of what he was doing, pondered whom he
should bring with him. Deiphobus was too hot spoken; Helenus, maybe…Gorgythion
would have wanted to go badly.
“Hector, I wish to
come,” said Cassandra.
“What would you
do?” He smiled a little at her.
“I must be there;
my dreams say so.”
There was not to
be fighting; and she was quiet and trustworthy.
“I am to be
there,” she insisted.
Achilles, unarmed
as he had said, waited.
“Is that a girl
with him?” Patroclus exclaimed.
Hector asked his
question plainly.
“Why do you want
speech with me?”
Achilles began
speaking, watching Hector. Patroclus smiled at Cassandra. She stared at him. He
tried again.
Achilles went
through the various facts, all of which were familiar enough to Hector. “And
you would not give her back.”
“The people
willed otherwise. What is your proposal, Prince Achilles?
“You are the
first of your Trojan warriors. Of the Achaeans, I am mightiest. We fight each
other; if you win, we leave. If I win, we take Troy.”
“If you win, you
take back the lady Helen, with treasure equal to a dowry,” countered Hector.
“Menelaus might
accept that. Agamemnon, Odysseus—not they.”
“I am sorry for that. Your suggestion might
have spared many of my people. I can agree to nothing that imperils Troy so
greatly.” Hector nodded courteously, turning to go.
“Is that really
why you fight, Hector of Troy?” Achilles demanded with unexpected intensity.
“To protect my
people and the city of Troy? Yes.” He paused. “And now, also because my brother
died, and he would not have, had you not brought war.”
“I like your
reasons!” said Achilles unexpectedly. “Compared to mine they are rather like
earthenware beside colored glass; but they are good reasons. If I were not so
eager to kill you, I think I might like you.”
“I cannot say the
same,” said Hector.
Cassandra chose
that awkward second to become bloodless and point a thin finger at Patroclus.
“Death and Honor
are in league, Patroclus,” she cried out in a loud, steady voice. “Both yearn for you; both shall have you!”
Patroclus jerked,
as one will if startled. “How did you
know my name?”
“I—I don’t,” she said, softly. “I didn’t.
I’ve never had a dream when I was awake, until now.”
***
Achilles did not
fight the next day, nor did his men. Achilles had picked a quarrel with
Agamemnon, and was hating every Achaean but Patroclus.
Hector felt
uncertainty among the Achaeans, and stuck from two sides. For the first time the
Achaeans doubted their victory. They pushed back; they held till darkness; but
they dreaded the sun.
Patroclus stared
at his friend with sad eyes. “You are our strength, Achilles—“
“Let Agamemnon be
humble, then. Let him beg. I should be glad of the sight.”
“Will you let
your people be defeated, over this?”
“Yes, Patroclus,
I will.”
The morning came
with eye-burning sunlight on Troy, and the shade of clouds over the Achaean
camp and the evil-eyed ships.
Hector consulted
early with his father and the other nobles of Troy, notably not including
Paris, and went in all his armor to his house before setting out that day.
Andromache had half filled her loom with fine gold cloth. She slid the shuttle
in silence.
When she spoke
her voice was very low. “I would that today you did not have to fight.”
Scamandrious
teetered around the corner, and saw a shiny man with a shiny thing on his head
and a bristly black thing sticking up from it. He bawled.
“I think your
helmet,” said Andromache more merrily. The helmet’s crest brushed at the
ceiling as Hector took it off. He laid it on the table beside the brown bread,
and lifted Scamandrious, whose amazement as seeing that the strange man was his
father had moderated his cries.
“It’s but a
helmet, lad,” Hector said.
“Must you go,
today?” she said again. “I fear for you every day, and every night; but today I
fear more than I can say.”
“I cannot leave
my people to fight leaderless,” he said. “I would live always in peace beside
you, dearest, if I had the choosing. That’s what I fight for, that all of us
can live in honor and love. So our son can have a good life.” He looked at her
solemn face and managed a teasing smile. “And so he needs not to be a soldier.
It would never do, the way he fears a helmet!”
The door banged,
and Helen walked in, balanced, graceful, sobbing dramatically. Her sobs were
not pretended; but they were flamboyant. She stopped walking, seeing Hector,
than rushed past them, vanishing into the other room.
“She will have
quarreled with Paris again,” whispered Andromache.
Her sobs came to
Hector’ ears even after he had taken a gentle leave of Andromache and closed
the door behind him.
This was a day for war. It was time to call
together all the power of the city.
***
“We burn
them,” Hector proclaimed. “Every ship.” The Trojans stomped and cheered,
punching empty air—or by mischance, air less empty. Now the gods held Troy in
favor. Achilles was gone.
Stout Trojan
farmers death angels were that day, and fishmongers found themselves furies.
Hector led them all.
He found himself
on the splintery deck of an Achaean ship. “Bring the fire!” He did not care who
burned the ship, so long as it was burned. It would not be he, for he was busy
fighting off panicked men who saw their leaving threatened.
A sudden louder
clamor made Hector look swiftly up. From the high deck of the ship he saw a
familiar team of the finest warhorses speeding towards the battle, pulling a
chariot. In the chariot stood a warrior in bright armor.
Achilles was
back. The timing could not have been
worse. Just when they might have burnt the boats. There was not a Trojan
without some fear of Achilles. Many believed Hector did not fear him. Hector
knew this to be false. At the sight of the bright armor breathing needed more
effort, and his stomach seemed to twist slightly. He leapt down to the ground,
landing a little off balance.
The man in the bright armor saw the leap, and
ordered his horse-driver on. Hector was coming to meet him, leaving the fight
on the ships. They would meet alone. He was very near Hector now. Hector’s arm
went back, and a bright bit of metal was first far away and then too near. Pain
sliced at his chest as he wavered and slumped out of the chariot, landing
roughly on the sea-moistened bloody sand. The horses whinnied and galloped
away, the driver’s protests bootless.
Hector pulled out
the spear, difficultly because it had gone through thick metal. The man
screamed; not in Achilles voice. Quickly Hector bent and pulled off the helmet,
noticing that it was not the one Achilles had worn before; this one covered
most of the face. Then he saw the reason for the change of headgear.
“You’re not
Achilles.”
Patroclus gasped,
pressing his hand to the oozing hole piercing the breastplate. “He would not
fight…I had to do…something….” He closed his eyes. “I did what I could,” he
said. Perhaps he wanted it known so badly that it did not matter that he
protested to an enemy.
He looked
painfully as Gorgythion had, lying there. Hector did not strike again; there
was no need. “Death and honor wait for you, too….” Patroclus said, and gagged
harshly. He grew quiet, and was dead.
Hector’s face
softened, for a space of time long enough to draw a breath or to face a fate.
He raised his hand, splattered with clotting blood, and drew his brows
together, questioning.
He turned back
into the fight; It was a strange thing, killing, to end killing; war, to bring
peace; death, to allow life. Gorgythion; he had fought for all these things;
and he was dead; he had gained nothing, and lost his life. But there were
things more valuable, which he had not lost.
How he missed that
lad! He had not had even an hour to mourn alone, unhampered by needed sleep or
necessary planning. Now was not the time to spend any thought on him. Yet the
wound in the chest, the fear; it had been too much alike. Gorgythion, I lead
you to your death, and now I lead these men to theirs, and none of this had to
be. It all came of a beauty, and a fool.
The Achaeans had
pushed the Trojans from their ship, and held them off now resolutely, as men
fighting for their return home battle. They had been on the point of success.
He should not have gone to fight Patroclus. But had he been Achilles, he must
have done so. Perhaps it was all fate.
For as long as
bread bakes they battled, two largely steady lines, fixed in their places. Then
Achilles, maddened, screaming aloud, lethally came to the attack with his own
Myrmidons.
In the space of a
few minutes, despite all Hector could do, every Trojan was fleeing for Troy.
Hector was last; but he fled too, retching at heart at the darkness of it all,
and acknowledging that he was filled with fear. Still he fought back as he
retreated, trying to defend the indefensible and end what could not now be
stopped. Achilles was not like other
men. He seemed a god, for he believed he was like one, invincible and exalted.
The Achaeans
pursued, killing many, dying less often. Panic had stolen the men of Troy, and
their sweating hands dropped weapons to lie dangerously sharp on the earth and
be bent by escaping feet. When the Trojans at last were within the gates Hector
glanced through the doors as they swung closed and saw his armies way marked by
the shining bronze and steel and the destroyed bodies of horses and men.
Even now they were
wild, scattering about the city. Helenus limped through the mob. “Are you
hurt?” Hector asked, although that was obvious.
“Not too badly.”
“Deiphobus, take
Helenus out of here.” Deiphobus grunted sourly and obeyed, shoving his way
through the crowd. They grew louder, and women began to scream, everyone moving
towards the king’s palace. Hector stood still, looking bewildered. At last his
brows leveled, and he pushed his dark hair back from his face, and took a few
running steps to stand facing the crowd at the top of the steps.
“This is not the
end,” he shouted out, and many of them looked at him, less trustfully than
before, but not without respect.
“Achilles is our great opponent. I will fight him, and kill him if I
can. If so fate brings about.”
“No, Hector,”
said a proud dwindled voice. King Priam walked slowly, out of the palace.
“Gorgythion is dead. Helenus lies bleeding. You must live.”
“Achilles is the
one man that we have cause to fear, Father,” Hector said. “If I can fight him,
and win, I believe we will have victory in this war.”
“My son, no.”
Hector took his
father’s age-warped hands and spoke gently, softly enough that the people
watching could not hear.
Cassandra was
running, horrified so that she hardly saw. She ran into a man and fell hard in
the street, pulling herself up and running again before he could even speak.
Her white robe was dusty now, and the people about her she saw through a
translucent layer of dream, which she could not altogether make depart from her
seeing.
A shout rose
outside. “Come and fight me, coward!” Hector sighed, walked swiftly towards the
wall, and climbed to the tower so that he looked down at Achilles’s tilted
scarlet face.
“There you are,”
Achilles said. “I am surprised—you’re not hiding. You know what I want.”
“It is fated that
we fight,” said Hector quietly. “I am coming.”
Cassandra met
him, running up the stairs as he went down. “I hear crying, Hector; I see
death; I am awake and asleep, and there is no sleeping or waking. Don’t fight
him!”
“If I do not
fight him, if he does not die, we will be defeated, and Troy will burn.”
“Troy will burn,”
she repeated, reciting a fact. “There is nothing you can do. I know.“
“Except my
duty,” he said. He smiled at her. “I have never prophesied ere now, but I know
something, and that is that we will both be remembered for as long as the earth
bears harvest. Troy will be remembered, and greater in the memory than ever we
saw it. And my son, and the other children of Troy, will know that their
fathers loved honor. If we cannot give them peace, we can give them that.”
He kissed her
cheek, wishing there were time to see Andromache again. But he had said he was
coming; and another goodbye would be hard for her. No; it was better she not
fear more than she already must be.
His hand grasped
the bar of the gate.
“Wait!” Paris had
come up behind him, lily scented as usual. “I—I am the one who should do
this. I began it.” He sped his words.
“It’s my duty,
by birth.”
“No.” Paris
looked at him honestly. “You said I should have been dead, and I said I wished
you were. I lied.”
“I’m not letting
you go out there,” said Hector. “I want you safe, brother.”
Achilles took
angry strides. The man was not coming. He jerked to face the gate as it opened,
and laughed, not quite as most good mortals do.
“A man of honor,
after all,” he said. “I would have regretted your not being so.”
Hector’s sword
was drawn, and his shield, engraved by countless strikes into illegible runes,
gleaming on his left arm.
They clashed. The
Trojans watched from the walls. The Achaeans watched from their camp. And two
vultures floating on whirling air watched too.
Strike, raise the
shield, move, strike, move, duck, back, advance. Quickly. Slowly. Warm light
now from the sun was good; even the trampled grass looked blither. Achilles’s
eyes gleamed, and the bronze glinted momentarily, not where Hector expected it.
He drew back, warm blood rushing over his arm.
Strike. Duck. Circle. His sword
nicked Achilles’s cheek.. Then he was falling, and could not move. He had
expected it to be painful. He was numb, instead. Achilles smiled.
The sun was dying
too. Or at least it was lapsing into night. But there were the walls of Troy,
guarding the beloved. Andromache…. The walls were still there. Not burning
yet.
Copyright©2014 by Abigail Leskey
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Great job with this retelling! Quite a story to fit in under 10,000 words :) Hector was always one of my favorite characters from the Illiad and I liked how you told the tale from his point of view. And you seriously write a detestable Paris! The little snotty brat! That's always how I viewed him ;) I really liked the visuals in this story too, very classic. Thanks for taking part in this challenge, Abigail!
ReplyDeleteThank you very much! I do think that Hector was the hero of the whole mess, and Paris would win the prize for stupidest, most annoying little brother hands down.
ReplyDeleteYou're welcome, and I'll be anticipating the next challenge.
I always loved Hector best, too - along with Odysseus. And oh my gosh, is Paris such a brat!! I loved this line from the story; so, so good: "Justice and reason had the chance of a fly in a fish-filled lake after that."
ReplyDeleteI do believe he really must have been one. To bring ruin upon Troy by stealing a married woman was altogether incredibly selfish.
ReplyDeleteThank you! I'm honored you liked it.
P.S. To give credit where credit is due; I am greatly inspired by Rosemary Sutcliff's books, and I doubt I would have written that without her influence.
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