tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3012189846533980168.post8221992145431849523..comments2023-05-19T11:12:17.877-04:00Comments on Tales From A Modern Bard: Song to Story Challenge-- "Red Hall" by Abigail LeskeyHazel Westhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01234157921832851920noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3012189846533980168.post-89971358314572958762016-09-13T15:19:16.928-04:002016-09-13T15:19:16.928-04:00Sorry...I just have a tendency to write stories an...Sorry...I just have a tendency to write stories and books with sad endings :)<br /><br />Thank you very much! Abigail Leskeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04220987331584276501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3012189846533980168.post-29573085580642379542016-09-13T15:17:11.079-04:002016-09-13T15:17:11.079-04:00Thank you! I think characters are the most importa...Thank you! I think characters are the most important thing about stories, so I'm glad that you think them interesting :) Abigail Leskeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04220987331584276501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3012189846533980168.post-43793534230002148122016-09-13T15:12:57.300-04:002016-09-13T15:12:57.300-04:00Thank you! I'm glad you approve of my man of b...Thank you! I'm glad you approve of my man of business ;) Abigail Leskeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04220987331584276501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3012189846533980168.post-15667548845357624962016-09-13T14:48:04.233-04:002016-09-13T14:48:04.233-04:00Aaaaahhh, it felt so medieval! And, once again, yo...Aaaaahhh, it felt so medieval! And, once again, you have pulled me into a tale and made me tear up...<br />You did a great job with it, Abigail. :DMarlene Simonettehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06467939783399662851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3012189846533980168.post-51818017917228776702016-09-12T19:31:05.626-04:002016-09-12T19:31:05.626-04:00I really like the writing style, and the character...I really like the writing style, and the characters were interesting, something that can often be hard for short tales. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12964282556271869964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3012189846533980168.post-81114054531564182302016-09-12T17:46:44.987-04:002016-09-12T17:46:44.987-04:00A highly captivating tale, this. Wilhelm makes a v...A highly captivating tale, this. Wilhelm makes a very good poet, and Jacobus an excellent man of business. Poor Hans.Joseph Leskeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01538730679002750119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3012189846533980168.post-90597655346540498612016-09-12T12:54:14.486-04:002016-09-12T12:54:14.486-04:00Thank you, I'm glad you like it! The names are...Thank you, I'm glad you like it! The names are rather a matter of my not knowing many Medieval Flemish sort of names, but I was aware of the Brothers Grimm ;)Abigail Leskeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04220987331584276501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3012189846533980168.post-31376728602274003642016-09-12T12:51:00.577-04:002016-09-12T12:51:00.577-04:00Thank you! I couldn't help the ending, since t...Thank you! I couldn't help the ending, since that is what took place, but I quite see why you don't like it.Abigail Leskeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04220987331584276501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3012189846533980168.post-22649300694380239472016-09-12T12:05:45.952-04:002016-09-12T12:05:45.952-04:00This was a very nice historical piece. I think you...This was a very nice historical piece. I think you did a good job with the style to make it feel not only like it was medieval, but from the point of view of a bard (which was really neat, how Jacobus was an inspiring bard :) Also the fact that the brothers were named after the Brothers Grimm was a nice touch :)Hazel Westhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01234157921832851920noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3012189846533980168.post-10206883291637311882016-09-12T11:38:15.682-04:002016-09-12T11:38:15.682-04:00This was interesting, though the ending was not to...This was interesting, though the ending was not to my taste. Anne Leskeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08313352572258836285noreply@blogger.com