tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3012189846533980168.post8506192646073769264..comments2023-05-19T11:12:17.877-04:00Comments on Tales From A Modern Bard: Inanimate Objects Challenge: "Black Rock of Tek-Fremsel"-- Benjamin LeskeyHazel Westhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01234157921832851920noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3012189846533980168.post-85745815747056523842017-04-13T22:46:33.820-04:002017-04-13T22:46:33.820-04:00Whoa, that was intense! o.o I was really worried t...Whoa, that was intense! o.o I was really worried there for a bit... so glad it turned out okay! :) Really unique and interesting. I loved all the names and depth to the world and magic system etc.<br /><br />“proof that being a chosen one doesn’t mean everyone likes you.”<br />“Maybe we’d like you better if you didn’t waylay us on the road.”<br />^ THIS. I LOVED THIS. XDDeborah O'Carrollhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05969896655321575875noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3012189846533980168.post-91620912779417276252017-04-09T15:43:48.777-04:002017-04-09T15:43:48.777-04:00This was a wonderful story! I enjoyed it very much...This was a wonderful story! I enjoyed it very much<br />Anne Leskeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08313352572258836285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3012189846533980168.post-30216429498092684022017-04-08T17:51:21.354-04:002017-04-08T17:51:21.354-04:00This was wonderful high fantasy! The rock attachin...This was wonderful high fantasy! The rock attaching to Tintelm was completely unexpected, and I really like the phrase, "and from his hands flickering circles sped." Abigail Leskeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04220987331584276501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3012189846533980168.post-22818405269996993292017-04-08T09:11:08.945-04:002017-04-08T09:11:08.945-04:00An entirely fascinating story. It had quite a wond...An entirely fascinating story. It had quite a wonderful blend of fantastical elements, excellently manifested into naturalness. I enjoyed it very much.Joseph Leskeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01538730679002750119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3012189846533980168.post-78296765473409036972017-04-08T01:13:13.595-04:002017-04-08T01:13:13.595-04:00This was an interesting and rather original fantas...This was an interesting and rather original fantasy story, I liked how you made the stone a central theme even though the story wasn't told from it's point of view. Tintelm was a likable main character and I also enjoyed the supporting characters. I think you did a good job with making this feel like a medieval world too, and the whole thing with the war and the magic system was really interesting. I wouldn't mind reading more about this realm.<br />And an official welcome as well, Ben! :)Hazel Westhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01234157921832851920noreply@blogger.com